六级范文:团结就是力量

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团结的力量

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Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

1) describe the drawing briefly,

2) explain its intended meaning, and

3) give your comments.


审题谋篇


本题为提纲图画式作文。因此,图画、文字和提供的提纲都是审题时需要注意的。从题目要求看,需要写一篇160词~200词的短文。从图片中我们可以看到,生长中的棵棵小草如千斤顶一样强大有力,顶起了压在它们身上的巨大岩石。

图片所揭示的内涵不难理解:小草的力量自然敌不过岩石,但是无数的小草一起不断地向上生长,奇迹也是可以发生的。图片清楚地告诉我们:弱者也是有力量的,它们的力量来自团结与合作。“团结就是力量”是经典的作文话题,我们能举出不少例子对此论点进行论述,因此如何写出新意就是写好这篇作文的关键点。

按照题目给出的提纲,第一段应当描述图画内容;第二段提出论点并结合实例进行论述;第三段客观地总结全文。


范文与译文

Unity Is Strength

The picture above depicts the strength of the weak. The power of the giant rock is incomparable with that of a grass. But a miracle is taking place in this picture: The growing grasses are as strong as the lifting jack, pushing upward the huge rock above them. One grass is small and weak. How about hundreds of them, or even thousands of them standing together? The weak could even be the strongest if they are united.

The power of every single man is limited, but the joint efforts will be infinite. Human is too weak in the presence of natural disaster. We have a better understanding of this when we see the earthquake victims cry for their buried relatives. They couldn't even uplift the collapsed beam only with their hands. But brand new towns and villages are rebuilt quickly in the stricken area. The wreckage is removed and the blocked river is dredged. Suddenly it seems that nothing is invincible. This undefeatable strength consists in the assistance of all over the country. The victims of the earthquake can hold on with the support of billions of compatriots.

Ants are small and weak, but they can destroy a firm dam with joint work; one drop of water is strengthless, but constant dripping can wear the stone. United, the weak can be powerful.

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